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plermpt's avatar

this was really funny. i didn't stop reading halfway through to look at my phone, or open another tab either.

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Caleb Caudell's avatar

Excellent job

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At Midnight, All the Agents...'s avatar

Amazing work. One day the internet will be outdated, I have no doubt about it.

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Caleb Caudell's avatar

Thank you

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☩🌲A Forest Rebel🌲☩'s avatar

Great work, I think you conveyed the inner thoughts and feelings of the mc very well. Definitely a good critique of the algorithmic leviathan that has a death grip on many people's lives. The style feels reminiscent of Zero HP, too.

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Caleb Caudell's avatar

Thank you. I wanted to show a kind of tech deceleration that was at the same anti-apocalyptic or anti-climactic.

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☩🌲A Forest Rebel🌲☩'s avatar

I like that a lot, a twist on the usual tropes. The idea that the bulk of people will actually move away from online life while a few holdouts remain trapped in it is certainly a lot better than the alternatives.

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enfanterribleidiotsavantgarden's avatar

This the future accelerarionists want? By me they should kill themselves. Accelerate that bitches.

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