Discussion about this post

User's avatar
A.P. Murphy's avatar

Enjoy the prose as always Caleb, but I would love another time to see these concepts which you're hinting at and swirling us around in toward the end to be developed either as basis for a narrative where the dynamic of a story realizes these themes, or as a flat-out essay with arguments that you could sink your teeth into. I know that's not your intent here, but maybe either of those could be a thing to do further down the line...?

As it is I feel the abstract concepts and the raw visceral sense of thinginess that you do so well aren't so much working with each other but almost against each other in the last part.

Expand full comment
Frank Wright's avatar

Caleb Caudell can write, which sadly means I can’t give up on literature.

Expand full comment
5 more comments...

No posts